User contributions for ThomasWalker

02:0702:07, 23 April 2026 diff hist +6,262‎ 1918 Influenza Epidemic ‎ Automated improvements: Flagged critical truncation of article body requiring immediate completion; identified multiple E-E-A-T gaps including missing sections on the Liberty Loan Parade, public health response timeline, morgue/hospital collapse details, and epidemic aftermath; corrected minor grammar issues including singular/plural consistency and tense uniformity; flagged outdated scientific framing of cytokine storm hypothesis and contested source-of-introduction claim; suggested six peer...

02:0702:07, 13 April 2026 diff hist +4,167‎ Dutch Conquest of New Sweden ‎ Automated improvements: Article requires urgent completion — current wikitext ends mid-sentence with large sections entirely missing. Key fixes needed: add specific surrender date (September 15, 1655), add Fort Casimir capture (1654) as proximate cause, add Johan Rising's role in surrender, complete the truncated Background section, and write Military Campaign, Aftermath, and Legacy sections. Multiple E-E-A-T gaps identified including missing specific numbers, incomplete inline citations, and...

02:0502:05, 9 April 2026 diff hist +7,278‎ Businessman from Philadelphia. ‎ Automated improvements: Critical structural issues identified: article lacks a defined subject (violates Wikipedia core policy), contains an incomplete sentence in Notable Residents, a potentially incorrect birthplace for Robert Wood Johnson, a missing citation for GDP statistics, and no inline citations throughout. Research findings reveal George Clymer (Philadelphia businessman, Declaration signer) as a strong candidate for the article's primary subject or expanded coverage. Article require...
02:0302:03, 9 April 2026 diff hist +6,792‎ Architect of Philadelphia City Hall. ‎ Automated improvements: Multiple high-priority issues identified: factual errors include McArthur's birthplace (Scotland, not Philadelphia), incorrect attribution of the Pennsylvania State Capitol, and likely incorrect dome height figure. Internal contradiction between 'Second Empire' and 'Beaux-Arts' classification. Final paragraph is incomplete. No citations exist anywhere in the article (critical E-E-A-T failure). Expansion needed for McArthur's biography, collaborators, Calder's sculptura...

02:0402:04, 24 March 2026 diff hist +3,542‎ Fishtown park commemorating William Penn's treaty with the Lenape. ‎ Automated improvements: Multiple high-priority corrections needed: treaty date corrected from 1683 to 1682 throughout (per Treaty of Shackamaxon historical record); geographical error flagged (Schuylkill River vs. Delaware River); unverified artist attribution (Lynette Yiadom-Boakye) flagged for removal; Chief Tamanend added as documented Lenape signatory; Treaty of Shackamaxon named explicitly; truncated final sentence flagged for completion; citations to scholarly and primary sources sugges...

02:0302:03, 11 March 2026 diff hist +3,172‎ Isaiah Zagar ‎ Automated improvements: Critical update required: Isaiah Zagar died February 19, 2025, at age 86 from heart failure complications; article must be updated from present to past tense throughout, death date and circumstances added, a Death/Legacy section created, and the truncated Philadelphia's Magic Gardens section completed. Multiple citations from recent obituaries should be added.

02:0302:03, 7 March 2026 diff hist +3,387‎ Cobbs Creek ‎ Automated improvements: Fix bullet/markup formatting errors in Getting There section; remove non-standard {{FAQ}} and {{#seo}} templates; update Cobbs Creek Golf Course section to reflect 2020 closure and current phased reopening per recent news; add note on cross-border development plan with Upper Darby; expand Cobbs Creek Park section to reference 2026 Little Nature Playgrounds initiative; flag need for History and Demographics sections; add citations for recent developments

02:0202:02, 2 March 2026 diff hist +1,671‎ George Washington Carver High School ‎ Automated improvements: Fix future access-date error, correct 'See Also' capitalization, note need for disambiguation from other Carver High Schools nationwide, expand thin sections throughout article